Bang, boom, bang, bong....
...and already the tune gets me in the beginning. It was very nicely done...but I saw this one going in another direction...its good, but I wonder if it could have been better had you gone in another, more happy direction :P.
Good though,
-AJ-
yeah it sfunny sometimes the music directs me rather then the other way around.. when making it haha. Though i may remake this eventually and see what i can do =) hell if you ever wanna do something with me song wise man just tell me.. I'm all for working with other people!
Agreed w/ below
In the beginning I immediantly thought of a boss battle in FFVIII, the beginning is too boring again though ><, up until around :34 you really only do the same thing over and over. Man, you have some talent with these, and I am wondering what would happen if you really sat down and broke a sweat :P.
-AJ-
yeah with this one i just had something in mind and went with it.. I didn't put to much time into it. really if i recall i think it took me about 2 hours to do all together. If you recall (being the chrono trigger fan haha I used the beginning part of Magus's Theme as a bass line =)
Are those...
Pads I hear in the beginning? Seems almost too slow...I think more note action would be great here, otherwise not enough stuff is happening. THAT is something that isn't normally too much of a problem...but it just didn't work out as much this time.
WOOP! 1:21...nice percussion, it really adds to the audio's over all feel.
1:40 few more notes added...this song has really turned into something nice. But I daresay that it was kinda boring in the beginning.
Sorry :(
-AJ-
Yup those are pads. it was kinda ment to be slow being a love song and what not but still yeah it does get boring up till that one part.. i was kinda working up to that though. I really wanted the drums to kinda suprise people lol.
Hmm...good, but...
It does get kinda repetitive. I like it nonetheless...still I have to wonder how well you would do if you managed to make one of these with more note action.
Still, great job and keep it up :]
-AJ-
yeah, i like it myself but me being my own bigist critique is the loudest part of the song gets annoying to me after awhile LOL. Though idid try to mix it up a little that sound shined through making it repetitive.. But its ok =) I kinda enjoy the song as is.. I may end up working on some other stuf to this extent in the future =) Thanks for the honosty and the 9 dude.
Wow...I should play this outside during halloween
It certainly has that spooky feel to it. Haha, I like this and I think that it would work really well for ANY halloween scarefest really. Really well done, and the vocals in it, both in the beginning and throughout the song really add a nice little touch to it. 1:18, sounds like a weed wacker...and screaming o.o, too bad nothing really freaks me out. But regardless it was good.
...and the laughter just adds to the spookiness .____.
Hell yes, the demonic laughter XD
-AJ-
yah, thats why i made it LOL to scare the crap out of kids and their parents.. Every year we have one outside in the front yard at my friends house and this year i thought i'd make a track (since i got into making music hah) Glad you liked it bro! I think the weed wacker was a chain saw though. Feel free to use it!!
Ah...
Kinda slow starting out...and it seems a bit repetitive at points. All in all this is nicely done but I think that it could have been a bit better. Nice job nonetheless,
-AJ-
It loops very nicely though :O
Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice in the next song that I make.
To light and then to dark...
To light and then to dark, that one footfall will tell a story of fate for one man. Having lost his beloved, betrayed by others he thought were friends. Setting his feet on the ground he turns to look at the place that he has called home all these long years. A tear down his face, the rain begins to fall, he can hear the Drums of war being played in the distance. Turning his face to the sky he allows the rain to pelt the grief from his soul, and so does he plead to make amends and seek out vengence against those that sought to destroy all he is and all he will be. As if his plea is heard, thunder roars drowning out the drums, and a break in the clouds shows him a blue sky, hope maybe, but he shall avenge his beloved. Turning he sets down the road to which not even a god can foresee his fate, he himself has changed his own destiny and now will he find that path to which strength leads. So as darkness envelopes him, the cry of the wind stops, its as if the world feels his pain, it last only for a moment...but for those with the sense, a battle like none other was building and history shall never forget the man who brought about the Fall of a Kingdom.
Again I deviate from what others had said...but I like it...
-AJ-
A brilliant story Cosmo! At first I thought this review was meant for Wrath of a Broken Soul, as it sits very well with that too, yet on careful consideration this story works flawlessly with this piece as well. It's exciting to read a story that blends in so perfectly with two different songs! I'm used to reading different stories for the same piece, so you can understand my intrigue here.
The deep and horrible journey the man will take, will no doubt crush his soul, and rip apart morals. In order to do what he wants to, he will become a monster, and he will have to smile all the while.
Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it! I apologize for the late response!
Doesn't sound right...
You had a really nice beat going in the beginning and I was waiting to hear something magnificent...but then at around 00:15 you brought in the choir Aahs that sounded distorted to the point that the audio just did not sound that good anymore.
00:45 not bad...that low drum could go.
01:03 Overdriver Guitar...I can't say that this is really dance though...I just don't feel the swing that Dance music usually has..
I am sorry man...this one could have been pretty damn great, but dance it is not.
Keep trying, I started out with some interesting pieces too :P
-AJ-
Good beats and the snapping of the finger was a decent add.
Oh ok. It's no problem actually lol. I'm using my first mix program where you don't just copy and paste samples XD. Since it doesn't sound so much like dance, I'm going to try and remix it and make it sound more...dance worthy. But hold out on me, I'm only 15 lol. (And a girl)
Hmm...
Hmm...you got a three...not sure why, this deserves a four. Its good, that new age?/bell combo(?) that you used throughout most of the song was nice but it did seem a little bit loud at points, which kinda threw the rest of it off (not bleed the ears loud...but a piercing loudness at points).
You want a couple tips here?...
Double up on the drums...
Clone the new age/bell track(s) and move the entire track forward and around a bit till you find something that fits and sounds good. The dings (what? XD) sound good...but I think that they would sound better had they had more beats overall.
Longer my friend, longer...maybe double the length with additional variety.
You know...its not that bad^^, its not bad at all,
-AJ-
Te dings (no homo) are from the same sound and if the notes go higher you won't be able to hear them. And like I said...I may do more to it but i'm not sure...oh and thx for giving it a four and I'm glad you like it!! ^_^v
0111...ugh :P
Computer language =.=. For those below...I think the artist named this with the numbers because it has a computerish feel to it. All in all I like it though =D
-AJ-
lol finaly some one gets it :P
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