Hmm...
Pretty basic loop...few pointers though...I will try to get the timing as close as possible here...,
First off...remake this with these pointers...you don't have to submit it just try them out^^
-In the beginning do a medium to quick fade in with all the instruments on the same level.
-00:00 through 00:08 The choir Aahs are a nice touch...tip, when you do that fold one note into another in order to make the audio not a "cut up"...should sound a little better this way.
-What is that? >.> Strings sounds like(beginning and through the entire song)...not bad...try mixing it with some wind instruments...namely an organ, and try some pitch rolling to make it a bit more eerie.
-00:10 though 00:17, this does have a creepy sound to it...I will admit the abrupt change between the Aahs that occur is nice...but try throwing another track on top of the Aahs, your choice on instrument, and again...try to fold the notes in together a little more in order to make the audio a bit more smooth.
-The fade out at the end was nicely done...indeed...what program do you use?
If you have any questions...or just want to yell at me some XD...just drop me a PM...I am no master...but I have always been good with these kinds of audio^^
-AJ (Cosmos8942)-