Yep...
It has that nice soft feel to it, I still think that you should try adding some of your own stuff to this, it would probably sound even better then. Other than the note change this sounds just like the orignal in many ways...8/10 for no originality, but an 8/10 it still is ^^.
That one track ...
Is sorta piercing...what did you use, celesta mixed with the Pad-New Age?
The song itself is not bad overall...I kind like it (but not as much as the original).
Add some of your own stuff too it and see where that takes you...who knows, maybe you will be the next great audio artist ;],
-AJ-
I would appreciate some look-see at my audio, si? XD
lol ok im not gnna try to sound like an ass but here goes...
For a person to be diffrent from the others they have to have their own thoughts and creativity u know wat i mean? If all music was the same then wat would be the point of submitting music at all?
I like to be diffrent from the rest. i will take note of tips and take them into consideration but mainly i will stick to the way i make things. maybe that can help u with urs too. know wat i mean?
Happy Listening
Hmm...
Didn't really need the instruments in the very beginning. I think that the beat you have justifies itself and makes the song what it is. Repetitive again (am I repeating myself? XD). All in all this is a really nice song, with a good beat, BUT I SAY AGAIN! MOOOOOOORE...note action please XD.
-AJ-
The Repetitive thing i'm trying to break away from.. Considering i'm still fairly new at all this. I'm gonna try to work on more notes in future songs.
Bang, boom, bang, bong....
...and already the tune gets me in the beginning. It was very nicely done...but I saw this one going in another direction...its good, but I wonder if it could have been better had you gone in another, more happy direction :P.
Good though,
-AJ-
yeah it sfunny sometimes the music directs me rather then the other way around.. when making it haha. Though i may remake this eventually and see what i can do =) hell if you ever wanna do something with me song wise man just tell me.. I'm all for working with other people!
Agreed w/ below
In the beginning I immediantly thought of a boss battle in FFVIII, the beginning is too boring again though ><, up until around :34 you really only do the same thing over and over. Man, you have some talent with these, and I am wondering what would happen if you really sat down and broke a sweat :P.
-AJ-
yeah with this one i just had something in mind and went with it.. I didn't put to much time into it. really if i recall i think it took me about 2 hours to do all together. If you recall (being the chrono trigger fan haha I used the beginning part of Magus's Theme as a bass line =)
Are those...
Pads I hear in the beginning? Seems almost too slow...I think more note action would be great here, otherwise not enough stuff is happening. THAT is something that isn't normally too much of a problem...but it just didn't work out as much this time.
WOOP! 1:21...nice percussion, it really adds to the audio's over all feel.
1:40 few more notes added...this song has really turned into something nice. But I daresay that it was kinda boring in the beginning.
Sorry :(
-AJ-
Yup those are pads. it was kinda ment to be slow being a love song and what not but still yeah it does get boring up till that one part.. i was kinda working up to that though. I really wanted the drums to kinda suprise people lol.
Hmm...good, but...
It does get kinda repetitive. I like it nonetheless...still I have to wonder how well you would do if you managed to make one of these with more note action.
Still, great job and keep it up :]
-AJ-
yeah, i like it myself but me being my own bigist critique is the loudest part of the song gets annoying to me after awhile LOL. Though idid try to mix it up a little that sound shined through making it repetitive.. But its ok =) I kinda enjoy the song as is.. I may end up working on some other stuf to this extent in the future =) Thanks for the honosty and the 9 dude.
Wow...I should play this outside during halloween
It certainly has that spooky feel to it. Haha, I like this and I think that it would work really well for ANY halloween scarefest really. Really well done, and the vocals in it, both in the beginning and throughout the song really add a nice little touch to it. 1:18, sounds like a weed wacker...and screaming o.o, too bad nothing really freaks me out. But regardless it was good.
...and the laughter just adds to the spookiness .____.
Hell yes, the demonic laughter XD
-AJ-
yah, thats why i made it LOL to scare the crap out of kids and their parents.. Every year we have one outside in the front yard at my friends house and this year i thought i'd make a track (since i got into making music hah) Glad you liked it bro! I think the weed wacker was a chain saw though. Feel free to use it!!
Ah...
Kinda slow starting out...and it seems a bit repetitive at points. All in all this is nicely done but I think that it could have been a bit better. Nice job nonetheless,
-AJ-
It loops very nicely though :O
Thanks for the review. I'll take your advice in the next song that I make.
Its so...
*crys* Its so wierd its hard not to love XD...great job on this...just like the flash :D...
Can't say I can do better...or get even close XD
I love it :O,
-AJ-
Though not enough for a download :P.
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