Cosmos8942's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maximize]

Hmm...

Up until 00:32 it just holds down two beats...

00:44 you bring in more than the beats then what you had originally.

From what I hear you are able to bring in a nice enough introduction, but I have to wonder if Techno is really your style. You seem (from what I hear) a Drum and Bass type of person, I dunno...I am probably wrong here.

It is a fairly clear, easy to listen to song (at the the 2:08) mark. But it just drowns in its own length. 02:35 you bring in extra drums...I think that that could have been done earlier rather then later. It is not bad at all, I just think that perhaps more variation in the overall melody of the piece and a cut on the length would more this song up a few more points ^^.

Its your choice to take my advice...and if you want any other advice on anything else (work on the ending here...it just kinda...ends abruptly...though it still sounded good o.o.) just contact either via PM, or at [e-mail], and don't worry I won't be stealing any of your work ;]...I think XD.

Decent, could be better...,
-AJ-

weemeee responds:

lol yea im tryin to make some decent techno but: i always make my intro way too long (i use too much build up)
and then for a short time theres a kick and then again comes another breakdown and the original melody etc.

and ill add u on hotmail lol

Ty For ur review :) :D <3 XD

[The Last War]

Hmm, sounds odd...

In a good way though. It almost sounds like it could be a cross between multiple genres of music. Though yes, Hip-Hop could certainly be one of them.

I see you have just got voted down, wanna know how I know that? Simple, this song probably got a 5/5 right away, then a couple more votes may have brought it down to a 4.46 or higher. Well, suffice to say that someone got annoyed and gave you a zero, or if they were nice a 1.

Well, I like this song enough that I think I will give you a 5/5 myself (3.12-->3.61), this one doesn't deserve to be way down in the 3.5 range.

So once again, great job,
-AJ-

zekinash responds:

Thank you very much Cosmos8942; First I have to say that I use a translator online to be able to extract the maximum divided(departed) to my Englishman and to do not know if I will give to understanding what I came to say. Thank you very much for the inconveniences(troubles) to listen and to punctuate it and more even for leaving so elaborated commentary. A positive and constructive critique. Perfect, it is the maximum thing that could hope, I cannot ask any more. I am very grateful to you, and do not comment any more, so(then) I doubt the integrity of my message on having translated it. A greeting, Zekinash.

[* Fight *]

I like this :)

It is actually fairly simple, but in that I think that in this case less is more. You really did a good job with this, just you wait...when I get the piano I will be playing this one :D.

Yeah, when I GET a piano ><,
-AJ-

[-/DownBeat\-]

Not bad, not my style...

But that won't affect the score any. I rate them how I hear them, even if they bleed my ears off. Oh, and to be nice here I am going to give you a 5.00 (2.00-->3.45), I just recommend you find a different area to place the song...it sounds trance-like...its just sorta hard to determine ><.

Oh well...I am just some idiot XD,

-AJ-

I would be honored if you stopped by my audio page area thingy, you don't have to...but I like to think that I am lovable xp.

[-/Breaker\-]

:O Go away >:P XD

Those vocals that I hear in this piece are really something, I mean...for a song like this you don't think vocals would really fit as well as how you made them fit. I love this, only problem in my opinion is it tends towards a bit of a loop, I would (as I am sure others as well) love it if you varied this up a little more because for about one and a half minutes it really didn't go anywhere. Make it shorter if you have to...regardless though great job.

I am going to give you a four here, you DESERVE a FIVE for this one but (I say this from experience), if I gave you a five a hater will come around and blow your score down the drain...this way at least you are sitting at a four.

Sorry^^;, but its necessary,
-AJ-

[-/Dream\-]

Woot!

That was great, you blended in the Pads and the Drums and everything else that I don't feel like mentioning into one great piece. Its not often that you hear Electrorock, as I like to call it, done this well. Great job,

Keep them coming! :),
-AJ-

[If It Can Brake]

Hmm...this is nice :)

Loops a little up until around 00:24 and then the percussion kicks in and I would have to say that it fit quite nicely with the song in general.

Kinda stayed like that...till 01:16 where you let the piano and tamberine take over. Its not what newgrounds is used to...and wow what was that o.o. 01:47 (or around there), I thought my headphones were going out there for a second XD. That static was a very odd touch on this piece and I am not sure where you thought you were going to go with it. But it fit, which is odd, normally static is a big nono on this site, or any audio site. Due to the static thing I feel this is a very good song for someone who wants to hear something a little different.

You did a good job, keep them coming,

-AJ-

btw, nice slow ending you have there :)

TimeBender responds:

The static idea came from my busted headphones, they would always screw up: the sound would disappear from one side or everything would get static-y.

Thanks for the review, you'll see me on your page.

[Midnight flash]

Not bad for a first submission...

This is not bad at all...lets see...

The beginning sounded a bit odd...but it fit in with the rest of the song...and since this is Dance it works.

Bit short...but many of the submissions on newgrounds only come around at 2min total...audio submissions anyhow.

00:00 - 00:11 was just a loop and then you brought in the drums which I would say fit in quite nicely with the rest of the song...thing is it just sorta looped for about 25seconds...but it was a good loop so I will let it slide :P.

00:56 I noticed that you brought in a couple more instruments and around 01:13 you threw in a couple more. How many tracks? Seven? Well you did a good job mixing them all together to make something viable...and hell it even sounded good.

Nice ending, again a bit short, but for a first submission this is really good.

Keep the good stuff rolling and don't let a low score get you down on this site, that happens to everybody at one time or another.

Look me up if you have the time, and don't think that just because one of my pieces has a low score that it sucks XD (course low on newgrounds is perhaps a 1.00XD, so lets say moderate as in 3.00 :P).

Good job, I think that if you stay on this path and keep submitting quality stuff that you could move up the ranks. Just don't expect it to happen too fast.

-AJ-

I will be keeping my eye on you.

[FF7 Boss Battling]

Hmm...nice...

Its decent, sounds alot like the original, but I will say that this has its points that are head turners.

One such place was the wild use of instrument, wild as in they were an unusual choice of that part of the song and the worked surprisingly well.

I will keep an eye on you and I hope to hear more stuff from you, perhaps remixes of the same audio that you are doing a decent job on.,

-AJ-