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Quite good...

Yes yes...a 10/10...seen this alot lately? :P.

Frankly I believe that you didn't need to find the notes anywhere, you made the spread sheet yourself and played from there...am I right?^^

Anyhow...great job, in the beginning I was wondering about what would happen later, and as fully expected, you brought in the full theme, great job...

Pls keep these piano scores coming, you know we love them ^^
-AJ-

You...scare me XD

Hate it when I find an audio artist I like...that means that there is just one more compition for afliXion XD(yes I am a fan of his...^^) Have to say that the dimming of the song throughout was kinda nice, weird, but I think it added some nice quality. over all I like the tune that you generated here, and the instument use (the orchastra hits were kinda odd...but worked :D)...

All in all I give this a 5/5
Keep 'em coming!
-AJ-

CyrusOfNaias responds:

lolz I was thinking the same thing when I first heard Paragon. > >

Oooh, the actual song, which was on Gameboy Advance, featured the hits, which I tried to sweeten up.
The song generally is supposed to be around the idea that you are taking off, reaching orbit, when you engage an enemy and the outcome is unsure. Therefore I featured the climing melody and occasional bursts followed by mysterious a choir. The sudden burst at the end would symbolize the sudden victory.

Thanks for the input! ^ ^

Hmm...

Pretty basic loop...few pointers though...I will try to get the timing as close as possible here...,

First off...remake this with these pointers...you don't have to submit it just try them out^^

-In the beginning do a medium to quick fade in with all the instruments on the same level.
-00:00 through 00:08 The choir Aahs are a nice touch...tip, when you do that fold one note into another in order to make the audio not a "cut up"...should sound a little better this way.
-What is that? >.> Strings sounds like(beginning and through the entire song)...not bad...try mixing it with some wind instruments...namely an organ, and try some pitch rolling to make it a bit more eerie.
-00:10 though 00:17, this does have a creepy sound to it...I will admit the abrupt change between the Aahs that occur is nice...but try throwing another track on top of the Aahs, your choice on instrument, and again...try to fold the notes in together a little more in order to make the audio a bit more smooth.
-The fade out at the end was nicely done...indeed...what program do you use?

If you have any questions...or just want to yell at me some XD...just drop me a PM...I am no master...but I have always been good with these kinds of audio^^
-AJ (Cosmos8942)-

Excellent

GOOD:
1. It fades in nicely
2. It holds the intro for awhile and moves on too...
3. A really nice little beat.
4. When the repetitve beginning more or less ends it starts into a nice sounds original beat that keeps the ears interested.
5. Slowly fades into the beginning beat and then begins to fade out.

BAD:
1. Repetitive in the beginning
2. Not enough going on...normally less is more...but in this case I think more could've been done.
3. The way this was made was very professional and deserves a high score...thing is what was said above actually in my case brings it down a notch or two.

-All in all this is a very nice beat...the thing I would like you to do is create something that has the same taste to it...but also more originality throughout the song. Good though^^-

Keep it up :D
-AJ-
Oh and check out my Terra's Theme song... I am hoping that people really like it :D:D

C3NTAURI0N responds:

Thanks a bunch... That's feedback that will really come in handy sooner or later. Thanks!
C3

Love it

There is really nothing wrong with this audio...its not perfect, no piece is...the thing about this song though...is I can feel...there should be some lyrics in here...definently...FIND SOMEONE WHO CAN SING! T.T Wonderful still...but woderful more had there been voice as well...but I suppose that was not possible =.=.

Great job and keep up the good work.
-AJ-
Remember what I said! :D:P

Soundshifter responds:

ha thx for the pointers man, and thx for a good review :)

I can hear it...

I can hear the "town-ish" theme in this...though it sounds almost like a theme for a town that is somewhat out of the way. Maybe something you would perhaps hear in the old FF games. Keep up these themes...I will be checking back later ^^

There are no 3.5s...so here's a 4! :D
-AJ-

InSaNiTyBoY responds:

Thanks, yeh I see what you mean. This and 'Forest Theme' are pretty old, couldn't remember what I made them for, so named them as I heard them. Thanks for the rating! :P

:D I like it ^^

Not only is it as you said...but it could almost be used as a travel overworld type them. Heck..darken this a little and you would have a dreary nighttime theme going. I think that this little tune has alot going for it...in fact I can see you making a series out of this :D

I really do like it...4/5 and 8 stars out of 10
Great Job
-AJ-

InSaNiTyBoY responds:

I may have to take action on that and make a couple of different versions of this. Thanks again for the high rating!

Not Bad

Hey Cosmos here...this is not bad...what program do you use for your audio submissions? But I have to wonder if the flute could have been replaced with the clarinet and actually sounded better...hmm...good job nevertheless

-AJ-

r0bz0r responds:

FL Studio 6 :) Thanks for the comments. As for a clarinet I don't really have a clarinet sound..So I figured flute and trumpet would be good enough :)

Excellent

I don't know the origianl song...so I can't say too much here. Though overall it sounds like it flows very well together, the lyrics arn't bad so good choice on that. All in all I liked it...

Wish there were far more good audio on newgrounds with lyrics added =.=
-AJ-

Haha! Good :D

I don't know...in the beginning I would have sped it up slowly instead of in the blink of an eye^^. But that is just me XD, overall not bad, personally I think it could have had a little more flavor but I still liked it^^

Good job,
-AJ-

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