Cosmos8942's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Metroid - Brinstar Green]

Ah...

Great job on this one. The instument samples flew together nicely, your choir Aahs/pads worked well with the background and the drums really gave extra feeling. I think I may have to do this one sometime ^^.

Good job,
-AJ-

Beacon515L responds:

Thanks man. X3

[FFX - Path of Repentance]

Well dammit all...

Now you have forced me to remix this one as well. Maybe I will play around with it like I did my Fable song >:].

This is good btw but might I recommend you place in "true" fade outs in areas around the song. Also, if you ever redo this one I HIGHLY recommend you place in some strong strings around 1:30 and let it build up....much like my ~-Eternity [FFX]-~ piece did.

-AJ-

Rofl, I just opened another window to get the exact name of my song and I had the piano track of this piece playing at double time....sounded kinda cool ;o.

[Voice Acting Competition -1-]

I really think...

You and Wyldfyre1 should get together and make something ;p.

-AJ-

Interesting though ;p

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

He voice acts? OMG!!!!

[Azarthian Girl {=MMD=}]

Quite good

In some ways this song is more magical without knowing the story behind it ^^. It allows for the imagination to flow more freely. There are some parts that could have been done better but for the most part it flowed very well.

Though Sand Castles is still my favorite of your vocal pieces ^^.

-AJ-

Oh, and I'll bet it is hard to fit "Azarthian" and "Dilogus" into a song like this XD

[Aerith Theme]

Hmm

Good but you should make some parts much softer then others. This sounds flat otherwise....either way this is well composed...

-AJ-

I think I will have to keep an eye on you just in case.

oh and hey, check this out...http://www.newgrounds.com/audio /listen/211628...don't mean to impose a song on you in a review, but I enjoy your songs enough that I would like a review or two from you ^^.

[Wyze+WF1 - F777 tribute]

You do know...

That some of those Zero's are ahem and ahem ahem ahem along with ahem right? I mean I don't want to name any names chronaCOUGH Ah, pardon me, I didn't mean to startle you there. o.o

-AJ-

Blasphem-E responds:

AH! YOU SCARED ME! Lol, and yes, I'm well aware of the likelihood of that. Thank you very much

[Let us Adore Him [Dance Xmas]]

Hello again ^^

First off let me mention that I expected something to come in at around 00:18, perhaps throw in a quick drum kick that leads up to the full beat later on eh? :D. Sounds to me like you either copied a track and moved it up the song a bit. Cheating, but hell...it works and it cuts away quite a bit of work time. I won't throw out a bunch of improvements for this song as I am guessing that this one is no longer being worked on. Not bad though, kept me interested for the most part.

Nicely done ^^
-AJ-

Kinda makes me want to remix a chrismas song o.o

UnrealReno responds:

Then go ahead! :)

[Hamelin - The Mourning After]

Ok...

Once again you have the right idea...

The choir Aahs don't work as well as they should, too quiet on some occasions, a little loud at others. They are too high pitched as well, move them down a bar or two, it would help. Also mix in some basic strings with the Aahs, when done correctly you dont' override them you make them sound just that much better. In the end the composition of this piece is very well done, but you NEED BETTER SAMPLES. It is NOT a bad song at all, but it could be made so much better if the samples that are being used didn't sound so...whats the word, oh screw it, some of them are just sucky.

Sorry T_T
-AJ-

Sicdrummer responds:

Thanks for the feed back
sorry bout the sound it sounds fine on my puter but i guess midi sounds different on all puters i listened to them on another puter and they sounded a little funky so i understand what your sayin
-Justin

[Hamelin - The Angel's Hymn]

Hiya

The overall melody itself is good enough to hold the song together even with the bad samples. Might I suggest FL Studio (obviously) or Anvil Studio (the latter is free) as both have much better samples then this. The plus is you can work in Anvil and transfer to FL at any time. Keep going, you have the right idea, just not the right programs.

-AJ-

[Villa Volta Dance Remix]

Hello again :D

00:41 Surprised me a little there with the (german?) phrase. I can't quite make it out...but hell, it sounds good with the song...what else do I need to know? The background percussion was moderate but the timing that you used was great. 01:30 some pads come in, unexpected, but eleven seconds later you toss in percussion and another pad which eventually leads to further use of the drum/kick and another solo with the pad. 02:24 see's another change in the song that leads back to the original flow. This is a nice transition and is what made the score go from eight to nine. Nicely done. 03:02 The phrase is thrown in again but I noticed something about it this time. You may want to add reverb to the voice to give it a more 'full' feel with the song. A slight echo would even work. I don't know, getting tired here, good piece though.

-AJ-

UnrealReno responds:

Wow, your comments are the best I had so far!

Thanks for the compliments you made. We aren't working anymore on this one, so for the critics, I will have them in mind for the next time! Thanks for the advise there again :)

See you around o/