Very very well done 10 stars, 5 out of 5.

The clarity of the sounds were very well done...could be better, but very good nonetheless.

The animation was smooth, off at some points, but only noticable to the trained eye.

The character animation was quite something. Some things could be worked on, but really, it wasn't even noticable unless you were looking for it.

The intro...well, like you said, the Intro wasn't anything to be proud of...but you did make it, so for a trailer, it was well enough.

Really, this does leave me hanging, and I can't wait for more.

KEEP...IT...UP!

-AJ-

How so many people judge a movie [flash] by its audio. SCREW...THE...AUDIO. It helps, sure, but many great flash's really didn't need the audio. So stfu you all below. Just because you didn't like the audio DOES NOT make the flash itself crap. If you don't like it, then turn the damn sound off >.>.

Its the same with those damn clock movies, sure, once in a blue moon a good one comes along. But more often then not they get reviews saying "wow, you know what made this good...it was that song you used...what was it?" >.>.

Great movie, plain and simple. The execution wasn't completely solid as there were a couple things making it so that the animation and the song were slightly off. But overall it was really well done.

Keep up the good work.

-AJ-

I say oh well on the quality. Sometimes to create something great on newgrounds, the quality has to be sacrificed a little. The subtitles were annoying as the flash itself was so inspired it just seemed wierd having to read what was being said. If you want to post your next installment as something larger then what newgrounds is able to support...simply ask Tom Fulp. For something of this quality I am sure he would take the restriction off the size for at least the next one. (He has done this a couple times before)

Really looking forward to the next one, voice overs and all. Very good choice of audio artist by the way. MaestroRage is a Prince among those who challenge themselves with music.

Keep them coming and let all of us know when you are done! (btw, you see all those votes? Those were all the people that were jealous of you >.>, quality isn't always a good thing it seems ^^).

Keep it up, we are all supporting you, 'cept those people whose lives are miserable as it is and that find no joy in life.

-AJ-

I am not familiar with most programs so I am unable to say whether or not the looped drums and clap is taken from anything...but if it original, it is very well done. The electric piano 1 that you used really helps the song along. All in all it is quite good, but one point was taken away for the fact of it looping a little. All songs do this, but yours felt like it should have not looped as it did. I 'unno =.=, probably just me ._.

Anyhow! Onto the real review >:3

1. The pads that you put in here in the beginning really flow into what is a excellent beat that has a partial fade out, fade in feel going on throughout the song itself.

2. Nice Cymbal use throughout the song

3. 0:24 brings in the Electric Piano 1, and does it add to the song! This song would be nothing without this instrument I think.

4. The piano loops a tiny bit, but with so much going on in some parts of the song its hard to really pay attention, therefore it can be considered to be good.

5. This ended too abrubtly, it is much like my Fleeting Times song, just feels like it should have really got at it. So strings set in a higher pitch, perhaps a sawtooth, and some airy choir would have done it justice. Do you have a midi or .WAV file for this? If so I would like to see what I can do with it. If you do not wish to send it too me, then that is fine...I just want to play with it XD.

All in all it is not bad, I will throw a 4/5 your way, though you deserve a 5 here, better to not be downvoted right off the bat eh?

-AJ-

Though I have to be serious, were you two bored? XD Its interesting and I can hear where it would have been very good with REAL instruments XD. But hell, this is what happens when a person gets bored, :D did you have fun? XD.

-AJ-

This isn't bad...let me do a comprehensive review for the first time in sometime...

00:00 - 00.07 Nice fade in, it works nicely, unfortunently it isn't the greatest for a loop...you know, loops are supposed to loop without stopping, so that fade in kinda ruins it :P.

00:07 I liked the simple drum placement and beat here, could have been drawn out a little better, but nice nonetheless.

00:20 drums disappear - 00:24 They reappear but are not as good as the ones used earlier, my suggestion, stick with what you had.

00:42 the ending cuts off abruptly. Now I know that the Newgrounds playback feature isn't the greatest, but due to the fade out in the beginning (which would sound great in a normal song) and the fact that it just cuts out...its hard to give this out as a real well-made loop. Keep at it man, I liked this, there were just a few things that could have been fixed. Good choice of instruments, nice flow...

6/10 and a 5/5 just because you got bombed on the first vote.

Peace man :P.

Check out some of my stuff if you like, though you don't have too :P.

Cya ^^

-AJ-